Again, haven't read this yet, but it's a problem if the protagonist's motivation for an utterly key decision is never clear - especially if it's something straightforward like "Was that sincere or a ploy?"
(Unless the book is something like Liar in which unknowability is a major theme. But it wasn't in the first two books, at least.)
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Date: 2010-09-13 06:14 am (UTC)Again, haven't read this yet, but it's a problem if the protagonist's motivation for an utterly key decision is never clear - especially if it's something straightforward like "Was that sincere or a ploy?"
(Unless the book is something like Liar in which unknowability is a major theme. But it wasn't in the first two books, at least.)